Saturday, February 14, 2009

Copy Edit the World 2

Prof. McCune's News Story 2 assignment

1st paragraph: "...working on a sotry..."

It should say: "working on a story"



2nd paragraph: "...a couple of tourist..."

It should say: "a couple of tourists"



Top News assignment from Prof. McCune


4th Paragraph: "You ask to Sheryl Wolcott..."

It should say: "You ask Sheryl Wolcott"


Two Feature Leads - McCune

2nd to last paragraph: “‘In my 23 years on the job, I’ve seen a lot of thing set off a fire alarm…’”

It should be: “I’ve seen a lot of things set off a fire alarm”

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