Friday, February 6, 2009

Copy Edit the World 1

Prof. Nichol’s School Notes page

It says: “Outside assignment: To be posted on your blog by 4:30 Wednesday, Feb. 8.”

It should say: “Outside assignment: To be posted on your blog by 4:30 Wednesday, Feb. 18.”

My second one is of Mrs. McCune's assignment jour61 website.
It reads "the boywas found," but should say "the boy was found."

And the second one is a picture of a menu in an Asian boba cafe called "Quickly" that reads "We made fresh Who care? We do!"




It should say "We make fresh! Who cares? We do!"

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